time 2 hang
why do u want 2 hang.
(hang? ha! I never said i wanted
2 start hanging myself . but now
that u mention it, it might be some fun.)
hang on 2 the little green guys
oh & dont step on them.
(why?)
Because they will turn red and
then they will try 2 kill u.
(Dude look at the little green men
their so fucking small. OH SHIT!
I just killed 20 of and now their
all red and trying 2 kill me.)
Run man run or they will get u for sure .
OH Shit put the gun down little Green man!
Bang! Bang! Bang! Bang!
A contest entry
- Make Me Pee by Cherokee.
300 points, ended December 2, 2007, 12 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 2008, 182 entries
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Comments
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this was an interesting poem, I must admit. your imagination is quite amazing..
though I do need to bring to your attention, that in my rules I asked that there be no chat speak. as I reading your poem there is chat speak through out. for this reason I am removing this poem from my contest.
kat
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Oh, you got quite an imagination ~ and a twist ~ to your story ~ nice play on words ~ so to speak ~ it certainly have quilled something out of this world ~
Nice job ~ thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you! -
WHHHHHHHHhooooooooooooT What fun here! I am so impressed by this poem… made me really appreciate your talent. The imagery here is mad and wild.
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Trippy. You've been watching 2 many bad sci fi films. A fun write and fun 2 read. They're morphing and it doesn't end well.
Now that's chaos.
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but i think it was a little over the top.
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thank u
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I'm sorry
But the rules clearly said no chat speak. I must remove your poem. -
i was just remembering my druged up on acid days
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you must of been high
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huh?
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well
i was just remenising on my drug days when i was an addict
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