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semantics

Missing image
We are the bearers of secret.

Minute universes
trying to connect


deep within, hidden
a shroud of insecurity


I do not know which is more comfortable, love or disconnect.


my mental state
brims with
sadness.
My heart melts with love
The center is the same


maturity Is loss

He is a shift
in consciousness
smart

the parrot
the macaw



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  • wow.

    your style is very different from what i've seen so far... but i like it a lot. i'm going to have to go look at more stuff you write. this was .... pretty fucking amazing.

    "He is a shift
    in consciousness
    smart

    the parrot
    the macaw"

    wow.


  • LilyRose
    December 7, 2007
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    Mmmm

    A very nice mellow, soft colorful draw to the center of thyself and emotion. Love this piece!