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Tell Me

Why do you always do this to me?
Come back when I thought you were long gone.
Why do lead me on right when you are about to fall from my grasp.
Is it that much of a love, or better yet a game we don't understand,
in which we both have so much to say yet not enough time.
Is it the miles,
because you know baby,
I can fix it with a word, of a long wanted future,
enough to say that I would wait.
Wait until time runs out,
until my eyes close and yours completely forget about my lips.
I want you, but not in misery,
I want  you in my arms in complete  exhilaration.
Where not only our hearts turn into one,
but our minds combine and make our blood pump fast
and hard enough to let every cell in our body find no sudden comfort
but the comfort of our bodies in twisted knots of passion.


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  • jaguar
    March 30

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    I'm not sure how to take this but I really like it. The style is intriguing and makes me think of... alot.


  • After the Twilight
    May 4, 2008

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    wow, This is one of your pieces that has that ability to make me relate it to my own life. beautifully written, I actually love this style. Well done!

    and, im not sure if you remember from quite awhile ago - but I used to be Red Satan. its good to be able to get back on here and see what I've missed heaps! Great to be able to read your work again!

    Much love,
    Kas
    xxx