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I craved the kiss of your sorrow.
Through cracked lips
I absorbed your pain, heartache and misery,
So that in a small way
I could be close to you











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  • pocket pixie gold member
    March 31

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    This makes me want to cry, really. I did this. The aftermath still shakes me sometimes, to be so lost...

  • Suzanne Dia
    May 19, 2008

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    I know this experience so well. Too well. These words could have been mine. Nice to know I'm not the only one. Good writing.


  • Star Shine
    December 5, 2007
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    WOW, ALL THE SENSES EXPERIENCE THIS DURING YOUR SHORT AND STRONG WRITE. WELL DONE.


  • momentary visions
    December 3, 2007

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    I don't know why it is that the only way we seem to be able to open up to others is by showing them our pain. For some reason, it seems to be easiest. It seems like we believe that who we are is what we keep from the world. I don't know why our pain is our intimacy but it can still be beautiful. Thank you for writig this.


  • Emile
    December 2, 2007

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    good

    This flows well and the short abrupt phrasing works well to chop this piece up into succulent slices of candied hopes and longings. The theme of the poem is submerged within the piece and emerges at the end. A little melancholy with a slow pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow.

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