Lost and all alone,
Unaware of her surroundings.
Chastised and broken.
Spirits are low.
Can she find her way home?
The cold snow drift,
Falls on her broken heart.
Heart as cold as ice,
Eyes as cold as stone.
Her body feeling numb.
Now maybe she can be set free.
Is there really a home for her.
Is there a home for me?
For you see I'm that lonely girl.
Lost and broken,
Trying to find my true home.
Author notes
option number 9
A contest entry
- Song Lyric Inspiration!! by TChaplinette.
450 points, ended December 10, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is very sad but things will get better. great poem i like it. thnxs for your comment on mine.
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I think this was really good, I however am turned off by the font and background. still, good write
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That was really good.
I love how you incorporated the lyric so well.
Thanx for entering.
=D
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