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Inspire My Life Lord

I look to the heavens,
I look to the sky.
I pray show me dear lord
and please touch my life.

I look to the heavens,
I open my eyes.
I want to see this world Lord,
and all of your might.

Give me your touch lord,
Show me your way.
Inspire my life lord,
each and every day.

I look to the heavens,
I open my heart.
I know that you’re with me
and you will never depart.

I look to the heavens.
Lord give me your grace.
Help me know your will lord,
every day that I face.

Give me your touch lord,
Show me your way.
Inspire my life lord,
each and every day..

Yes, inspire my life lord
each and every day.

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Picture Prompt: Inspire Me by =thalia-is-crazy
http://thalia-is-crazy.deviantart.com/art/Inspire-Me-8401078


This came to me as a song, I wish you could hear the tune.

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  • Denierim
    December 6, 2007

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    I would very much like to hear the tune too... lol

    I like this piece a lot. Even through the simplicity of the words, you brought out the emotions of someone wanting to be inspired by a thing one loves, and that's a big thing in this world. We all want to be inspired by that one thing we love, may it be God or someone else, something else. I like the soft atmosphere in this piece, telling one's longing in religion; wanting to be touched by God. This poem is a beautiful thought, and a beautiful way of portraying it.

    Wonderful work with this one!


  • wildfiredreamer
    December 4, 2007
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    very good. I love it.