I gaze into the sunset
as the rays
play softly in my eyes,
I stop
and let it warm me,
thoughts dance in my head,
happy thoughts resting since long
waiting for an incentive
to release their vigor,
mesmerized
my the calm
cascading from
satiation,
I wish this moment
lasts forever.
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Excellent take of the prompt. I love to watch the setting sun over an ocean.
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Yes a sunset is so pretty and over the sea,beautiful. Sometimes just among the clouds, it seems to disappear*sigh*
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This is really a nice take on this picture she is so precious
.Thanks for sharing this with me best wishes and much love
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Very nice take! I loved every word. ^-^ I do love to gaze off into sunset's and just think of happy things.
Thank you so much for your lovely entry! I truly appreciate it!
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