you defeat yourself
if you see no prize in life
trying, is to live
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trouble comes and leaves
hurt is not a one time thing
tomorrow comes soon.
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less is never more
more is an excess of pride
humility lost
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all things change in life
what are the things that change you
do you trust your heart
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dance. hear the music
love. you will live forever
cry. you laugh again
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there is no right, wrong
only public opinion
and of course, lawyers
In a list
A contest entry
- Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you defeat yourself
if you see no prize in life
trying, is to live
---
trouble comes and leaves
hurt is not a one time thing
tomorrow comes soon.
----
less is never more
more is an excess of pride
humility lost
----
all things change in life
what are the things that change you
do you trust your heart
---
dance. hear the music
love. you will live forever
cry. you laugh again
---
there is no right, wrong
only public opinion
and of course, lawyers
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a very nice haiku chain, but just a little hard to follow from haiku to haiku. -
Outstanding!!
You amaze me every time I read one of your poems!! Love the ending to this great message!! Don
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Haiku is a part of my random thoughts. sorry got cut off from the full message.
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Random thoughts belong to me. no contest here.smile.
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Tht random thoughts are a breathe of fresh air to me!! Keep on writing my friend!
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Absolutely splendid!
I admire haiku and this string of haiku is so truly fine!
Every one is delightful and the last one made me smile!
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