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Unspoken Words

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I walked into the coffee shop
all eyes on windblown me
ordering my breakfast;
someone scanning real close.
Every step I knew he was
there his body was aflame
I felt his aura driving me insane.

We met eye to eye, magic
devoured our souls
romantic vision unspoken words
made us become untamed.
The sway of my hips cause
his bottom lip to tremble.
Smiling, refreshing my lipstick
he could not refrain.

Crossing shapely legs, showing
the sexy split and soft
smooth thighs; I realized!
My words were silent yet scarlet
embracing him all the same.
He left me wanton ravishing
my tongue; with his phone
number dancing in my hand.
Unspoken words; I knew
he was the man……




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Prompt: Body language

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  • gaze
    December 9, 2007

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    very sensual images! inciting movements that can only work in the senses to make of that moment a special one.
    well done with your poem, I enjoyed reading it


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    December 4, 2007

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    gosh i know what this feel like Mrs E my hot self have been through this all LMAO its like for the moment I am traveling down memory lane loved it i think you did excellent
    good luck
    jewels


  • Mykeee
    December 2, 2007

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    ooooooooooo.weeeeeeeee. yes. happens so often that I never carry business cards with me any more. Can really get in trouble. Love the feel of this. great write mom


  • Brazos silver member
    December 2, 2007

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    That wasn't coffee...

    it was Dr. Pepper, I only drink coffee about once a month. And I love the way you "flashed" me when you crossed your legs. You weren't wearing any panties...

    Call me soon, love.

    Your devoted AP husband,
    Brazos