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Schizophrenia

Fear as I approach the mirror.
Which one am I today?
The one hiding in the moonlight?
The one who dances in the sun?
Or perhaps a broken angel,
One who hates the world?
Eyes reflecting the conflicted souls within,
Tormented and writhing in pain and ecstasy.
Desperately searching for a release,
A place to unlock the angels and demons inside my head.
Another day, another change.
What am I now but an empty cage?
A prison of personalities, cell floors paved
With the blood and tears of my inner selves.
Decadence ensuing with each passing day
As I lay in the forgotten chambers of my mind,
Ever waiting to be called out once again.

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  • Invisible Freak
    March 23, 2008
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    That me everday, but I control and hide all feelings...

  • Baisi
    January 8, 2008
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    This is really good. Sad, and depressing, but good.


  • lovingfatman
    December 3, 2007
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    great poem very deap and dark. i like it.

  • Irish-Maiden
    December 2, 2007

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    This is amazing, it really captures the emotions very well. "What am I now but an empty cage? A prison of personalities," that line is just, it really brings out the htoughts feelings and emotions all together great write...

  • XxToxicBeautyxX
    December 2, 2007
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    Another great write of yours...It had a great flow keep on writing

  • TChaplinette
    December 1, 2007
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    wow.
    that was amazing.
    I love it.


    was that for a thousand different versions of yourself?

    if it was, that was a whole new take on the lyrics, and it totally worked.

    I loved the imagery and the examples.

    Thank you so much for entering.

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