The first day of school I went to Soderquist park to wait for the school bus. I saw you so I walked to you then I said what up what's you're name? Then you said Chelsey Wattles so we talked a bit then I left. For some reason something told me at the second that we would best friends so talked more and more to each other. Now we friends and we laughed and you are the bestest friend ever. I hope that we stay friends for ever. People keep on telling me that stop talking to you but ignore them. The reason I do that because you're my friend. If you need help then I'll be there to help you out no matter what anybody else says. That's what I do for my friends if somebody puts you down then I'll go up to bat for you. The reason I'm you're friend because you're nice, and funny, and you're fun to talk to. Like I said before Chelse I hope we stay friends forever.
A contest entry
- Poetic Love by Samplette.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 8 entries
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Nice poem! What a heartwarming story! Keep writing and good luck!
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Nice poem Michael. Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Brian -
This is nice poem for friend
love genna
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This is an endearing write about your friend. I do want Ap friendships for this contest however. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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This is a wonderful prose; you draw the reader into the story right away with the question posed in the second sentence then the reader is hooked and wants to know what happens.
Love,
Amera♥
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