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the ornament

The ornament
By Eric Ethan
I look  over all  my  room  for  a idea to write tonight  I  think of  ornament  that  is special to me  to share  with you
I  give  you this  ornament  from me  to you  cause  you  are  a very special  friend to me
This is ornament is no regular Christmas ornament
This is  ornament has a special thing to it
It is filled with real diamonds that is fit in this  egg oval shape
It has  a red opal in the  middle  that will shine so bright at night
It  has  a  special meaning to me  cause  it  was  given  by a  queen  and kings of  far  away lands, for  doing  a  job  well done I did  for them
But I want to give this    ornament to you on this special holiday
That  has a lot of meaning to it 
When  you hung in your  tree  and turn  off the  light the  red  opal  will  shine  through those diamonds  tonight  to  cast a  beautiful  color  all over  the room  to  make  your heart  feel special tonight
To make your Christmas bright just take turn off the lights and let that ornament shine tonight
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  • Elvenfairy
    December 23, 2007
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    sounds like a very pretty ornament. On our tree we have ornaments we've collected over all the years. Lots of disney ones, and a bulb for each year. Anyways, I liked your poem a lot. Makes me wonder what it would be like to have diamonds on a christams tree. Thanks for entering my contest. Merry Christmas!