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In Waves of Tension [incomplete]

  the images scream into my head;
like radio static - I want to grind this life away,
hands trailing down unsuspecting legs
your reaction,
  it was a priceless addition to my egotistical ways;
and suddenly pedals bloom into streetshows of
  lights
and sound.

tongues dripping of turpentine;
  comfort reactions on a start-stop basis rendering
  your words useless and soft-rimmed;
like those eyes,
  the ones that kept me warm in the midst of
      disaster and car crash humor.

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  • ZachofDoom
    December 4, 2007

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    i like this alot

    i have a bad feeling though....this have anything to do with the thing you wouldn't tell me?