I exist day after day
Knowing sometime
Everything I have ever done
Nothing is all I’ll get
How can I stay
Now that I know
This real you
Hidden deep with in
Then you want to say
How you are sorry
Will I be your friend
But your hate is all I get
You broke my heart today
Then confuse my mind
Tainted my soul
Till you broke all of me
Filled with dismay
How shall I carry on
I did nothing to you
Still you lower my confidence
Wanting to fade away
You just left me here
No more words of love or hate
Just the sound a door slamming shut
A contest entry
- what exactly have you won? by black lagoon x.
420 points, ended December 22, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow!!! the ending left me breathless.Thank you for your entry in our contest,we don't get many as good as these.
-Phoenix -
Awesome.
This was great. It's something that a lot of people can relate to. It flowed very nicely. Good luck in the contest.
~jen
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