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Panic

Trapped in a small room.
Panic

Surronded by darkness.
Panic

Your head turns feriousiosly.
Panic

Screams imit from your dry hoarse throat
Panic

The door busts open and slams against the wall.
Panic

The blinding light.
Panic

The familiar cold barrel against your skin.
Panic

Bang...all is blank
Panic and Death

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This is a complicated peice to understand. You have to picture yourself as the person in the room. the person screaming for their life. the person screaming to get out. you have to really dig into the self concious to fully and completely understand this peice. if you arent up for the challege. dont read or comment. i want full critic. i want complex thinkers.

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  • Aw. Panic and death i loved the ending

  • Deathletter
    February 10
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    Fantastic

    Fantastic piece Jessy! This was an absolute pleasure to read! Thankyou for sharing this!