Shall I draw a velvet curtain here,
to hide form irresistible cupid arrows?
for I fear,you may need to borrow
an archer of Empire times to fail me
But to my surprise I'm more baffled
what sin did I commit to deserve
enemies like did the Adolf Hitler?
Or did the mirror mistook my image
Am I not looking like Prince Charles
ready to apple in the trees of kingdom?
Dear foe...
I'm confused more than an electric fusion
Time untie this knot for me
For its too hard knot for me to untie
Have some pity for I may be on
deaths bed soon
-Farewell
Author notes
Its about a clown who blames others for everything;
He thinks a lady is interested in him and this is his reactions to it..he is confused and blames the mirror,time etc
this character is taken from Shakespeare's Twelfth night..A fool he is..Feste the jester
lol hope you had a laugh now less bored?
Please tell me what you think
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Aw..thanks
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cute write enjoyed reading tale of your clown
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Well
I can see you are on educated lady. It is truly amazing as I never stop learning. Thanks so much
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Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.Bob Fox,I appreciate it.
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Hmmmm I really like this it is a good idea and a different topic for the poem... nice work with reflecting on thanks for the entry.
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Glad that you liked the poem ty
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well ur notes helped a lot in beter understanding of your write.. well i read twelfth night and kinda really much enjoyed the play.. twins suiprise
well about the feste had very sophisticated charecter, he was actully the smartest person there who was able to notice our heroines voilas fake cover..
well ur poem relates a lot towards malvolio.. he was fooled in love
well your clown talks like shakespearen english but has knows hitler and prince charles.. a unique blend
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Is it abuyi...I guess you are the only ap friend of mine who read it.Good to know.
lol twelfth night is so funny.Specially when the text in it is understandable.yeah this poem reflects more on malvolio.I guess I have mistaken malvolio as feste.Anyway feste was also a comedian and he is a witty fool.
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lol.. yeah it is funny.. many movies copied tht story plot.. it was said that shakespear took the story plot from soem other drama but those time there were no copyrights and all the charecters were played by men and boys.. that also includes the romance and shockingly audience enjoyed those chrecters ..
well i m suprised to know that none of ur ap friends read it.. i read cause i took litrature n had shakespeare in it
hope to c u more often
regards
abuyi
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