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Interlude

The ocean rusts in the stagnant blood
of dying afternoons.
Copper-taste of sunshine
in her mouth, she swallows
in hopes of soothing
her throat-lodged heart.

The sun wrenches holes through her,
relentless as the tide.
She yearns for moonbeams;
chesire-cat grin in the sky:
co-conspirator in despair.

There is no time now,
only the sea sniffing at shores;
softly stealing her dreams
with the sand
as she hesitates...

Something needs to change.

..she follows after them;
past the crimson tide,
tiptoeing over her horizon.



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  • neitherherenorthere
    January 12, 2008
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    amazing as always. you have not changed. miss you...


  • Pollycheck
    December 1, 2007

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    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. You have penned a beautiful poem and a fanstic take on this prompt. The imagery is so vovid and descriptive. This is an outstanding job.