Living in chaotic solidarity
{please don't let them pick me next}
Depression my best friend
{for my body is not my own}
Perverts and pain all around
{someone please kill me}
Enslaved since I was five
{who all have crawled across my body}
I am scared to sleep and refuse to eat
{luckily I am called to glory}
I left with only one question in mind
{when will it end, who will cry for the little girls}
Author notes
My quote was: A tear dries quickly when it is shed for troubles of others ~By: Marcus Tullius Cicero
My number of doom is: 4 LMFAO
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Comments
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AMAZING
oh I feel your pain and frustration
for I have been there, and what a place it is to be!
it's so hard to project this and show this hurt for all to see and read and critique. such courage.
ty for the comment! And no I don't always feel this way inside and just recently have I started to fight for her...it's going to be a hell of a fight but Iam ready!
take care
::huggs&kisses::
LB
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This is such a meaningful poem, a strong poingnantly sad, touching write. It seems to come straight from your heart and soul.
The message comes through with strength of meaning, plaintively spoken, hopeless yet hopeful.
A superb piece
Dee
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Nik,
You have no idea how hard this one hits home for me. I swear it was as if you penned some very deep thoughts plucked straight from my mind. Damn girl....talk about leaving me to cringe with my memories. Powerfully done!
Sorry I took so long to get around to this but the last month has not been the dullest for me.
Blessings
Bel
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