To those who believe life is to be lived and nothing more
I challenge a look at something greater
I dare one to see your eyes and see only eyes
not a soul - tangled in ripples of emerald and blue
To know your smile without knowing the angels
wait beyond the final breath
To feel you once without over and over
finding no silk is as sweet
To dance in your presence, to sample your essence
not making two left of their feet.
The envy of all, jealous of none.
We wander the road carelessly, accepting it as the undefinable,
when you captivate our view
Love
becomes You.
Author notes
Prompt: "I was dead before I met you, I was born the day you loved me, and my love for you will keep me alive forever." ~ Cole to Pheobe from Charmed
(CHARMED is my FAVORITE show ;D)
A contest entry
- ~*Phrase/Quote Prompt*~ by TwilightDazzles.
525 points, ended December 2, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good
I think the poem is good. However I think you may have made a mistake with 'angels.' Angels have wings and angles are figures formed with two or more straight lines.
If you put angels deliberately, then I'm sorry for correcting.
Again I think this is good.
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Nope
No it was supposed to be angels lols thats what it says
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Oh this is just beautiful! I love where you took the quote! And such truth you have written. And Charmed is my favorite show as well
Thanks for entering and I wish you the best in the contest 
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