All these times I thought I would die
I've lived through it all just to see myself cry
All these times I thought you were there
I could've sworn I felt your hand brush my hair
As I lie awake missing you, feeling nothing but heartache
You said you loved me just to watch my heart break
Sweet words are poison, "I'll never leave you" was a lie
I look back and realize it was stupid to think what I'd find
True love? No.
If I was your everything, how could you let me go?
Author notes
For everything he ever said that I was dumb enough to believe.
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Comments
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Love the anger... Diva (Boo) does to.
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WOW.
Really intense, and the anger was brought out very nicely.
But I felt that the flow was a little choppy, as you tried to make it rhyme. Think it would be better if it were free verse.
That guy is a total @ss, so forget about him and start anew, alright?
Hope you're feeling better
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