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The Rhinoceros

The Rhino as a creature isn’t very pretty,
but is the main subject of this little ditty.

It had to dress for the zoos’ costume ball,
looking in its closet, nothing to wear at all.

It wanted to go dressed like a ballerina,
but the outfit was the funniest you’d seena.

When the Rhino put on a pink and white tutu,
everyone could see its great big boo-boo.

So it went as a rather large ghost instead,
by wearing a sheet from boo-boo to head.

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  • Fedrizzi
    December 7, 2007

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    HAHA! this was a great humor piece, I loved it, ty for your entry, and I would give you 3 applause, but i do not have the points but i must say, lovely write, and good luck in the contest!


  • Hipsis94
    December 2, 2007

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    hehe i think this is absolutely hilarious

    i love rhinos too but this is just funny, please write more like it


  • Maldronah
    December 1, 2007
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    How dare you speak so of the Rhino.
    I think he's lovely.
    Mrs. Rhino


  • ixtli
    December 1, 2007

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    Oh I like this! It's kind of funny. I laughed out loud when I imagined a Rhino in all of those costumes.