The Rhino as a creature isn’t very pretty,
but is the main subject of this little ditty.
It had to dress for the zoos’ costume ball,
looking in its closet, nothing to wear at all.
It wanted to go dressed like a ballerina,
but the outfit was the funniest you’d seena.
When the Rhino put on a pink and white tutu,
everyone could see its great big boo-boo.
So it went as a rather large ghost instead,
by wearing a sheet from boo-boo to head.
A contest entry
- Inspire a young depressed soul, give me inspiration by Fedrizzi.
340 points, ended December 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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HAHA! this was a great humor piece, I loved it, ty for your entry, and I would give you 3 applause, but i do not have the points
but i must say, lovely write, and good luck in the contest!
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hehe i think this is absolutely hilarious
i love rhinos too but this is just funny, please write more like it -
How dare you speak so of the Rhino.
I think he's lovely.
Mrs. Rhino
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Oh I like this! It's kind of funny. I laughed out loud when I imagined a Rhino in all of those costumes.




