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Alone in a house

Alone in a  house
Two friends and I
Dancing and eating downstairs

A door slams upstairs,
Startling us
The dogs we let outside
And made our way upstairs
Armed with waterguns and brooms
Music still blaring
More sounds we heared.
As we crept up the stairs
Hid in a bedroom we did
House became still with silence
The music suddenly stopped
Staring at each other,
We carefully tiptoed down stairs
Finding the music on pause
We freaked out.

As we sit on the couch
The dog cage rattled
Making us jump off the couch
Thinking someone is in the house
She grabbed a steak knife
Griped it tight and was
Ready to pounce
When nobody was there
We started to relax
Only until she found
A hair on her plate
Jet black and short

We see a movement in the bathroom
And let the dogs in from outside
Hoping it would help some how

Back on the couch we are
Saying what if we opened
Our phones and it played haunting music
Her phone rang
Opening it, it played haunting music
Creeping us out
We retreated to the garage
Called the dogs to come
They didn't
No sound came of paws on tile
Brave, she went back in
Baseball bat in hand
She returned with both dogs

Finally her mother arrived back

Author notes

Option #1. Sorry its so long, but I wanted to put everything in it.
After this her uncle kept scaring us and jumping out from around corners.

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  • MidniteAngelOfDeath
    February 7, 2008
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    GGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD
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  • X ace of spades X
    December 28, 2007

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    cooooooooooooool

    well, im also a paranoid person and i know how you felt. Q: do you ever love the thrill of paranoia?


  • unmasked synergy
    December 2, 2007

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    liked this! my problem was I've seen this background and font misused so many times for some overly morbid stuff it just gets to me. however props to your poem for still having held me despite


  • Tarja
    December 1, 2007

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    No worries, the length gave me a chance to really get into it! This was freaking crazy! I would have been so scared! There is no way I could have stayed at that house! Thank you for the chilling entry and good luck.