When you sneeze with all your might,
Someone will quickly say Gezundheit.
It’s because you sneeze your soul away,
That’s what some people definitely say.
My oh my! what if that is really true,
Then someone better say, God bless you.
A contest entry
- I Need Some Pick Me Ups by di ivers.
600 points, ended December 20, 2007, 18 entries
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i enjoyed the poem thank you for entering and good luck..
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This is a beautiful poem that is so innocent in its statement and delivery that it calms the heart. Your words are simple, yet so strong and layered with emotion. It flows well and holds your interest from start to finish.
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Lovely poem great write
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Delightfully charming!
Well done poet you have captured humor and wisdom in six beguiling lines... Brava! This should certainly cheer our contest host up
Words can do so many things your skill & talent have been put to wonderful use your gift is beautifully given
Wishing you and yours a joyous Holiday Season
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A witty little ditty.
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Good
Mr. Lear could have benefitted from you. You should specialise in nonsense verses. This one is good.
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