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[ The Ghost Riders In The Skies,

The ghost riders in the skies,
Where the cowboy goes when he dies.

Past cowboys now ride the clouds,
Angels cheer them on from the crowds.

They ride them until night fall,
Then they rest, one and all.

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  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 8
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    that's a cute image - my dad used to sing that song. loved the imagery and rhyme. well done!


  • Tarja
    December 1, 2007

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    I like that you took inspiration from the song. That was a nice touch. And the rhyming was lovely. However it really wasn't write long enough to get into... maybe add some more detail?