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Winter Wonders

Soft white powdered wonders make my mind soar
Happy winter feelings are running though my head
I love snow and its beauty,it sparkles up my world

We grab our sleighs and let the joy begin
So many adventures in the Christmas season
My favorite is the snow,let me tell you more

 

Wondrous chills and cold cheeks

No frowns in this season,just smiles with plenty joy

I love winter! For it is a blessing of a season 

 

 

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i am 10 years old

A contest entry

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  • Elvenfairy
    December 29, 2007

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    well for a ten year old thsi was one great piece of work! Thanks for entering it into my contest. Sorry it's taking me so long to judge, but as you can imagine, there are a LOT of poems to read.


  • Dancing the Rumba
    December 18, 2007
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    I adore winter, and I must say you do to!!!
    Vivien


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 7, 2007
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    So very lovely and smooth. It is serene. I adore it.


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    I love the cadence (the rhythym and song-like quality) of your lines. You have done a beautiful job evoking memories and fantasies for your reader. Excellent work!