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Chivalry

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Chivalry is held in high esteem,
By the Knights around this table,
'Tis the Heart of who we are,
Essential to keep the Kingdom stable.

A Knight must be dexterious,
In the weapons of Defense,
But his Character must be tempered,
By Valor, Courtesy and Good Sense!

Understand, We are men of War,
'Tis our Duty to protect the weak,
Aged denizens and children young,
Are those of which I speak.

Also those whom we ensconce,
Are Maidens, Damsels fair,
We've sworn Oaths to safeguard,
See that harm doth not ensnare!

We must our Oaths do honor,
As we've sworn to the King,
Thus rescuing Damsels in distress,
'Tis a most Excellent thing!









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  • Gypsie Ink
    March 3, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    An oath that should take place in this day and age! Thank you for your entry and best of luck in the contest.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    Very Outstanding, this is awesome. Good luck with it.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    WONDERFULLY SWEET

    I do love the Knights and their fair Ladies...the honor and courage, oath's to safe guard...sighs...I just love this !!!Got to be a winner!!!


  • Frodofan silver member
    December 2, 2007

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    Very nice. I like the last line. Very sweet. This definently has the arthurian mood. Thank you for entering.


  • Knight70 silver member
    December 2, 2007

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    Excellent!!!!!!

    All I can say about this is that I really hope this wins the gold. It's just OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!! Knight70


    • Haiku-bless-you gold member
      December 2, 2007
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      Don

      Thanks for the kind words and encouragement, It is appreciated.

      Dennis


  • Tarja
    December 1, 2007

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    That picture is one of my favorites in the world! And this poem was a perfect match for it! You did a prefect job bringing the era to life through only words of poetry. Fantastic job. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure Frodofan will love this!

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