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The Bouncers Tale

Step down and walk where I tell you
This will be the end my friend...
Trust me look at my eyes and
...Know your night is through

This is know longer a joke
No smiling happy shiny time
put the bottle down and...
well let's go

I am gonna come at you once...
happy go lucky and with respect
But now you have pushed it
Trust me its time to go

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  • Anna Emkah
    December 4, 2007

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    The end of drinking alcohol. Hahahaha... What an ingenious idea you have come up with. Very good. I found one typo... In this sentence: "This is know longer a joke", I think 'know' should be 'no'. Nicely done. Anna.