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This Is Christmas

Candles light up the house
Aromas of pine and fresh backed cookies
Fill my nose as I walk in
Decorative lights every which way
The tree covered with
Colorful ornaments and garlend
Nativity set up on the table
Stockings hang from the mantel
Glasses of eggnog
Sit half drinken in the kitchen
The reeth hanging on the door
Presents under the tree

This is Christmas

Author notes

What I think of when I think of Christmas.

A contest entry

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  • PortkeyToNowhere
    December 14, 2007

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    Very descriptive

    This was a very descriptive poem. I liked it a lot although you have a few spelling errors and tense errors. Good luck with the contest!

    Hugs Nicole xoxoxoxo