She was only the postman`s daughter, but she always had some male in her box
A contest entry
- ONE LINER by Stickboy.
950 points, ended December 3, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Haha... That's a good one, love. I like the play on words 'male' and 'mail' and the subtle idea of her box...
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lol well...
this was funny thanks for entering and best of luck
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very good
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
that's, for sure, a one liner
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lol creative one this....can't really analyze it any further
AP: Point out your favorite and least favorite parts. Which areas sound awkward? Use line numbers.
hmmm in line one i think its a little too forward....lol -
HAHA!
WELL DONE!
THIS IS AMAZING!
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lol..Good one..All the best!
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That is awesome!!! I really did just laugh! Nice one liner, man! You are so clever sometimes! Good luck in the contest!
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LMAO!!! This is sooooooooooooo funny! Good luck!!! =D
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LOL OMG!! This is funny...
Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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