Training wheels -
as if you've grown new feet, the kind you can stand on.
The security of having something to hold onto -
handle bars.
Never worrying about your helmet
because you'll never fall for me.
Warning way before the crash -
caught before you scrape your knee.
Love
as first uncovered
in the eyes of a child.
There is really no need for introduction.
Instinct more than action
like being held in arms
of the Angel,
one destined to hold you
It's like the moment you realize
it can't get any worse
because it keeps on getting better.
Water running down your face
immersed in the before -
when you find the strength to move
each tear drop weighing more
than the memories, the pain
Taking off your sole-less shoes
& dancing in the rain.
No sound of music
No line from the movies
Poetry and plays a scene too short
to say
nothing
Silence is the key
soft enough to be cut
by whispers, poetry
of a quiet heart
When you catch me
I,
the author,
keeping your sight company
There is really no need for introduction.
Author notes
I struggled to finish this, so it may have lost it's balance a bit....I might work on this a bit more later =] <3333 What I mean by this is that when you truly love someone, you won't have to explain it, they will just know....I know this from experience....Love lives in the eyes. This is to the man I love, but he doesn't know...hence the "quiet heart" part.
A contest entry
- The Ultimate I Love You Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended December 6, 2007, 17 entries
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My compliments. I would have caught onto the quiet heart part eventually but a;ways happy to reads an author's note to help futher understand it. your poem flows with deep love and your heart opened up like I have rarily read before. this is a mighty fine slice of poetry and I also love the way you wrote this. the flow was superb and the delicate balance of the wording is fine. you did a nice job all round and keep it up and Good Luck -
"Taking off your sole-less shoes
& dancing in the rain.
No sound of music
No line from the movies
Poetry and plays a scene too short
to say
nothing
Silence is the key
soft enough to be cut
by whispers, poetry
of a quiet heart"
smoking. sis this was the bomb and i loved the background. Your great and i hope u get the gold♥
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