Honestly Speaking I still miss you til this day
and kisses you had left so affectionately upon my face
I miss the way you mad my heart race
when you teased my left ear, with pleasure I could barely take.
I remember playing within your purple magic
but when you left in a way so tragic
that left me confused
and prety mad at you
but still for the record, I miss you
I miss your voice, and the sight of you
us chillin on the couch and watchin' tv too.
Those hot session of us makin out in public view
and I'm privately lifting you bra, sucking and bitin your nipple
Even though you're just around the corner
I don't wanna be too close to you if I can't have you
cause if you read my poem "Passion is a beast"
then you know why I feel the way I do.
I miss callin you baby,
havin you as my lady dressed in purple
taking you out to eat,
and having you home before curfew
I miss you, and I'd like to have you back in my life
whether as a girlfriend, a friend, with no string attached (if u know what I mean)
But then again, these desires only appear in my dreams
but you have the power to make my fantasy into a reality.
So write me back in a response of poetry
and don't hold back, baby tell me everything.
Please tell me what you think
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This speaks with noting but love and sincerity. Keep Writing!
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This is sweet and I can feel all emotions comin from this. I love the descriptions in this. My favorite line was: "I remember playing within your purple magic
but when you left in a way so tragic
that left me confused
and prety mad at you
but still for the record, I miss you"
I hope she responds.
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this was kinda good. I think this was suppoes to be in my contest but this was aiight.
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Thank you FINALLY you commented on my POETRY!!! lol anyways, I couldn't enter it into your contest because I'd be lying if I said it was for you. But I noticed that you ARE holding a contest, what's it called again?
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wow dre............u are really tellin her how u really feel huh?........speechless and i am for real thos time.
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hmmm well i kno who this is for ....good job expressin how ya feel mi dude....and i kno she'll come up wit sumthing good to respond back wit....good luck wit yall
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