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I'll stay too...

If i were on a bridge,

I'd jump off.

If i had a gun to my face,

I'd pull the trigger.

If i had a knife close by,

I'd stab myself.

If i had scissors in my hand,

I'd slit my wrists.

To live life the way i am now,

Isn't even worth a breath.

Being criticized by everyone,

Being harrased with eyes.

Getting raped with words,

Getting hurt with lies.

Losing my innocense,

From insanity.

Losing my self-respect,

My serenity.

The only thing keeping me,

Is knowing you'll always be by my side.

You'll always listen and talk,

with respect and pride.

Those two i lack,

In me.

The things i need,

To see.

What makes me me,

what makes me free.

I love you to death,

And i need you.

Just stay with me,

And i'll stay too...

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  • my tears run black
    December 3, 2007
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    this a beautiful i loved this poem it is so deep keep it up!


  • xxxPrincessAngelxxx
    December 2, 2007
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    very good poem, so deep and beautiful. good job with it, keep it up


  • Misery into Melody
    December 1, 2007

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    Wow i actually really liked this. You have some spelling mistakes, its fine just make sure that they're all fixed for the judging.