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Remember me

I remember your eyes adoring me
as if drinking in my soul
I remember feeling the warmth of
skin on skin, touching, teasing,
anticipating tender moments
bringing forth the passion
of ecstacy.
I remember your kiss and the
overwhelming need to be with you,

The desire to be in your arms and the
light caresses of your tongue
causing me to tremble as your lips
found their way to mine
I remember soft whispers of blissful
happiness and joy
as you placed a golden promise
around my finger.

You spoke of togetherness and
always for ever and ever.
We dreamed of each other enfolded in love
embracing a lifetime that waited for us
I remember loving you
and yet,

As we sit now
in silence
eyes never meeting
your words
curt and empty
I wonder,
Do you remember
Loving me?

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  • Despairkitty
    December 2, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    Well done on your piece. I am a greeter and wanted to welcome you to the site. Feel free to ask any questions.
    Despair


  • aprilsprings08
    December 1, 2007

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    Amazing

    I think this piece is beautiful. It brings back some of my own memories and the forgotten love that I had with someone. I applaud you.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 1, 2007

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    Welcome to AP

    First of all, let me take this opportunity to welcome you to all poetry!
    We're very glad you've decided to join our family of poets!
    Secondly,
    (but VERY important ) This is a fine write! It speaks of many emotions and very in depth in feeling; I know we've all had times where we can relate to the emotions conveyed within
    Most excellent!
    Look forward to reading more from you!
    All the best!


  • unmasked synergy
    December 1, 2007
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    wo wow! amazing! loved this wonderful write!

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