he slid his hand up the sleeve of her robe
she closed her eyes, a smile became her clothes
he let fingers caress the length of her smooth skin
she smiled ... broader ... eyes winked at him
he lightly touched fingers to her palm
she was compelled to respond
he let glide finger tips down to finger tips
she uttered sounds ... like tiny sips
he moved to her nape, and round her neck
she pushed her head back, hummed, as he pecked
he let his wet lips leave a saliva trail
she elevated her back as if billowed sail
he pressed flesh to flesh ... they became one
she spoke his name followed by "hon"
he used his body parts as words to express
she replied with her sweet tongue's caress
they spent themselves for an hour or more
they ensured there was naught left to explore
they had now spoken this novel complete
they closed their eyes ... spooned off to sleep
A contest entry
- The poetry of body language by Aura of night.
375 points, ended January 18, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Man you do seduction well.....>>>breathless.....your word play is phenomental....the metaphorical magic is like a soft caress....my fav line..."she elevated her back as if billowed sail" Best of Luck!
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I smile thinking of these new clothes...very soothing sleeping pill. Sweet.
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A smile became her clothes...
God I could live in that line. Beautifully written
Bravo
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beautifully done...
good luck in the contest
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