"How wonderfull
the twinkle in your eye
Love, you thought you would never find it
but its raining diamonds
tonight
Hand in hand
dancing around us
The earth is filled with stardust
Your heart skips a beat-
and you feel a sudden rush
If your lips should brush
you'd be lost in the touch
Can you take the chance
How wonderfull
the twinkle in your eye
Love, you thought you would never find it
but its raining diamonds
tonight
You can't deny- it
There is no way to hide- this
love...
Hand in hand
dancing around us
And the earth is filled with stardust
it's raining diamonds
tonight
It's raining diamonds
tonight..."
Author notes
I have no idea how to spell 'wonderfull', lol so to all you spell freaks I am deeply sorry if I spelt it insanely incorrect.
-The Author
Please tell me what you think
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A Song Lyric in Poetic Forum??? For ... umm ... Love's Sake!!!?
I wish I had much to say, but beyond the alliteration, I recile to silence, and pleasure in the measure of thy steeped rhyme dancing my eye into eternity.

twinkle and diamonds earns plaudit of moi self. A good place to use that cheesey allusion, especially in the repetition.
"wonderfull" was spelt with either a "-ful" or a "-full". These days, post 1880s (sic) and The Oxford English Dict(ta)tionary, people feel obliged to be smart.
But poetry is RT, not Remedial English 124.
http://reference.com has good multiple dictionary referencings, with etymology (the origin of words. "virtue" is an interesting one, as is "innocence").
Anywho, haven't been here much for..only a little while.
Trust you'll be back before my comments disappear from your "Messages" opening page...
ciao.
*thumb_up*
MA.

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Thanks!
Yeah, I'm sorry I haven't been on for awhile. It's been a little hectic around here.
Oh, and thank you for the web reference. I could always use a little help with spelling words I don't use very often.
Also it sounds interesting.
-JADA
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