Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

How Wonderfull

"How wonderfull
the twinkle in your eye
Love, you thought you would never find it
but its raining diamonds
tonight

Hand in hand
dancing around us
The earth is filled with stardust
Your heart skips a beat-
and you feel a sudden rush

If your lips should brush
you'd be lost in the touch
Can you take the chance

How wonderfull
the twinkle in your eye
Love, you thought you would never find it
but its raining diamonds
tonight

You can't deny- it
There is no way to hide- this
love...

Hand in hand
dancing around us
And the earth is filled with stardust
it's raining diamonds
tonight

It's raining diamonds
tonight..."

Author notes

I have no idea how to spell 'wonderfull', lol so to all you spell freaks I am deeply sorry if I spelt it insanely incorrect.

-The Author

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Master Anarchy
    December 20, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    A Song Lyric in Poetic Forum??? For ... umm ... Love's Sake!!!?

    I wish I had much to say, but beyond the alliteration, I recile to silence, and pleasure in the measure of thy steeped rhyme dancing my eye into eternity.



    twinkle and diamonds earns plaudit of moi self. A good place to use that cheesey allusion, especially in the repetition.

    "wonderfull" was spelt with either a "-ful" or a "-full". These days, post 1880s (sic) and The Oxford English Dict(ta)tionary, people feel obliged to be smart.

    But poetry is RT, not Remedial English 124.

    http://reference.com has good multiple dictionary referencings, with etymology (the origin of words. "virtue" is an interesting one, as is "innocence").

    Anywho, haven't been here much for..only a little while.

    Trust you'll be back before my comments disappear from your "Messages" opening page...

    ciao.
    *thumb_up*
    MA.


    • JadalaStar
      January 11, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks!
      Yeah, I'm sorry I haven't been on for awhile. It's been a little hectic around here.

      Oh, and thank you for the web reference. I could always use a little help with spelling words I don't use very often.
      Also it sounds interesting.

      -JADA