You+My open eyes=Instant Attraction
The Law Of Attraction states that if you smile at me
that way that you usually do you will send me on a spiral and
make me dream about you for another week or so.
Care and Maintance of My Attraction for You: Make sure to walk in that
flawless way; and laugh at at least one thing I say in that adorable way
that you do. Again, a smile will set me off. When you sign your e-mails
with Love [insert name here] xoxo you know you've got me under your finger
again. Following these steps will ensure that I don't stray from noticing you.
A-[insert name here]
T-[insert same name]
T-[again]
R-[again]
A-[again]
C-[*sighs* again]
T-[you've guessed it!]
I- [Yup.]
O-[Another time]
N-[Lets roll once more]
Excellent. Do we understand CHAPTER ONE? Good. Tommrow we'll move on.
Well, we'll move on to CHAPTER TWO. We all know I'm unable to move on with you.
A contest entry
- LOVE: Made for Each Other by Shenanigans.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Law Of Attraction. by Ibius.
800 points, ended December 16, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - No Rules by dead-love-for-fun.
740 points, ended January 10, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
different.
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this is amazaing I love it. keep writing
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haha! This was amazing! Very funny, yet meaningful too. I like how you admire the details--the little mannerisms and quirks-- that's always a very good sign. This piece is original and really stands out from the rest. If I werent judging, I would applaud you. Bravo and good luck in my contest!
--Shannon
(PS: only thing you forgot was the "of" in The Law OF attraction) -
OMG YOUR A FRIGGIN GENIOUS
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lmao nah it SUCKS
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this is hilarious but in my case unfortunately true, that little smilee and adorable laugh always sets me off
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ah ha thanks. isnt it annoying when you just can't get them out of your head? i really didnt think that anyone would like it because it was so... different. but thanks, i'll try to write more like it; just for you keep reading my stuff, i'll check out yours.
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