together forever you promise
the ring on my finger says it all
my one and only
just a little longer
untill we can be together
people tell us it's wrong
but we know it's right
i lay awake at night
thinking soon
you will be next to me
soon everything will work out
we may be young
but we can wait
i know you wont leave me in the dark
just two more years
untill at last my love
the ring will be what it is meant to be
marriage of two teens
Author notes
Option 3
love always hurts eventually
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Wow... who are you and how are you reading my thoughts? lol. I really, really like it. This is what I think about every minute of every day. Thank you for sharing this and entering it in my contest. Best of luck.
Sarah
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This was really interesting.. I was a teen when I was married as well.. Only 19
Now I'm 20..lol.. This was cute and sweet.. Thank you for sharing..
Best of luck.
Angel
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this is really good. each line - as if a person was actually talking to another. really good use of layout and it works well. this is a lovely tribute about teenage marriage. well done and thanks for entering xx
p.s please re-read rules. thank you xx
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Very nicely written, teen marriage can be hard but if your both willing to put the effort into it you could truly spend a lifetime together. Thanks for entering
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wow nice i love the way you put "the ring will be what it is meant to be" i love it good luck ^_^
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nice write
i was 16.. a teen..and my husband was 17.. when we meet and dated only 6 months before we got married..and we were married for 28 yrs..he recently passed away but i do believe teens can love and marry young and it can last for years and years or untill death do you part....nice write! thank you for your entry. -
thank you so much!!! truth in each word
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I honestly do not have much faith in teenagers marrying. My mother was 16 when she married my 18 year old dad. If this is personal, just don't have kids for a LONG time because the odds are against you and just be sure that you WILL be together forever by waiting it out before you have kids... divorce really messes with them. Good luck in the contest.
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