Pretending I'm just your friend,
when I really want to be more than that... but I know...
I'm not c/u/t/ O/U/T/ f/o/r/ Y/O/U
Impersonating my darkest side, becaUSE I know you would love her...
She's a killer for the pain...
Cut out into suicide, Valentine's Day, was never [mine]
Such a dreaded day, were couples share secrets while I consume in dismay...
Have fun with her, just the way you did to me.
God, why does this happens to me?
Love is just a suicide, [it gives you hopes and get you high,
be careful you may fall out of the sky♥]
So much for that day...
when you opened my heart, and filled it with pain...
{Still, why do I sufer for you? if you never sufer for me?}
{then why do I love Valentine's day, if you're never here with me?}
Author notes
by XvampireeyesXX
A contest entry
- Give me a [ 2 ] heartbeat catastrophe {watching you love her} by CatastrophicSmile.
500 points, ended January 31, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Suicide, Kill me....
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oooooh i definently love this it's really beautiful. thank you for entering sweetie ♥
So much for that day...
when you opened my heart, and filled it with pain...
that line really inspired me x
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Wow. I also love the background..let me be first to say. It really helps the poem out. And yes..I totally get these feelings and I love how you said them. It's so strange how people always give all to someone, even though they never do anything in return..yet we still love them. So hard. But awesome poem.
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lol thank you.. this was really random.. the background aint mine lol its jsut one I SAW in a profile and borrowed it so I THOUGHt it would look nice with this poem so lol it did.... than kyou for all your comments really i appreciate them.
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wow. This is realy good. I LOOOOVE the background!!! is this a new AP background or your own custom one? (if it is, awesome!!! lol) Nice work! keep it up!!!
Crimson (BTW< "sufer" is "suffer" but it's all cool! lol>)
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