You move towards me sensually
You touch my hand eventually
I pull you on my lap to kiss
What a way to live is this
On your knees I sit and melt
When your lips on mine are felt
Not just your lips, your tongue's there too
All of me I'd give to you
Wrap you in my arms and squeeze
Your tongue within my mouth to tease
On my lap you start to move
How can a day like this improve
Your hands explore, my legs, my back
I can't sit still I start to crack
As you start to touch my skin
Each touch outside I feel within
You clothing starts to drift away
While you within are here to stay
Caressing and undressing you
Every day with you is new
Now it's you that I'm undressing
Every part I'll be possessing
The day continues into night
But we two now drop out of sight...
A contest entry
- Weave Me Some Sensual Magic by StormGoddess.
390 points, ended December 6, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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It sounds as though written as a collab, (and if it's not, damn good job ofmaking it seem so!)
Creates an excellent story that readers can follow beginning to end.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
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All me and if it reads like 2 people I got it right, so thanks!
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