follow the sounds of a
strained serenade
as you wait for the twilight
to sleep through the day
come on
fight the urge
to be useless
fight it
fight it
fall
give every last life
a chance
to be lived
and consider
the alternative:
reconsider
where will you go?
where will you hide?
when will you stop?
i'm too far away
to be by your side.
it's all you now.
there is no rock bottom
there is no hell
it can always get worse
your fault
we're locked in this
bank vault
you might as well be neon
you might as well have been
wasted
give every last train
a shot
at the station
it's kind of a
hopeless
situation
did you consider the implication?
it's all you now.
A contest entry
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800 points, ended February 15, 2008, 34 entries
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I like the message here. Overall I like this, though some parts more than others.
Thanks for your entry
Lea
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