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Hourglass

Tilt the wineglass

and place it on top of another.

It becomes an hourglass.

 

As sands of vacuum

trickle down from void to void,

 

we measure how long

this silence lasts...

 

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  • grannyeri gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    Like the presentation on this page, the color and sidebar work well together, then the poem and print color too. Liked the flow and the sentiments expressed in these few lines. Sounds like a tough situation to be in, that silence tehat can be cut with a knife - so awkward and makes one feel so ill at ease.