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wasted

they're
coming
for
you

avoid the violence
a void: the silence
null and void
trapped
in self-reliance
but it's not your fault
just remember:
it's not your fault

they're
coming
for
me

save me
from the paranoia
of living alone
bury me
in the rubble
of my soul

a life in rubber
lifetime member
give me something to remember
when i recover

sorry i didn't come for you
when you needed me
i'm sorry you waited
i'm sorry

in the haze
wait for your
secondhand savior
reborn
son of a
helpless
bastard

excuse me sir
is this what you were looking for
all along?

all alone.
bury me
in the rubble
of my soul.

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  • g r e y i s m
    February 15, 2008
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    I like the wordplay here. this is nicely expressed.

    thanks for entering...

    Lea