You are horrible. I hate you so much.
You're the middle of all of my pain.
When I think of you, It doesen't rain, it pours,
I swear you've got my heart on a chain.
I want you to go; and never come back.
I don't want to see your face again.
I want my heart to get hit on the head,
So it'd forget it, my longing would end.
I don't want you here; why won't you leave?
These feelings,I can't rise above,
I want you to go; but still understand,
That in my language, hate really means love.
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Comments
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i feel like you saved me.Thank you for entering my contest =] i really loved this peice.
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i can relate. When he wouldnt listen, when he's a jerk I always said i hated him... then once i told him what it really meant... that i loved him. its all over now, ihavent talked to him in ages. i still love him but not enough to save him.
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waaaw! it is very nice so strong! great and to the point well done hope you win!
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thanks very much
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