All angel food cake
and lady finger parfait.
True blue m&m eyes
that tempt me to take,
a taste of spiced rum
from her raspberry tongue.
The essense of lemon drops
to pucker her lips, and
all the way down to
her sticky bun hips.
Don't forget the pudding
so tastey and warm,
Nothing this sweet
could cause any harm?
Add two scoops, vanilla
with cherries on top.
And here is the woman,
after my own heart...
Author notes
~*~HAPPY~BIRTHDAY~AMERA~*~
A contest entry
- Open Form Contest for Amera's Birthday! by Allan Emery.
600 points, ended December 3, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a really fun poem comparing the woman of your dreams to a very tempting desert. I suppose thats fair enough and I like that thought. I think you've presented it really well and I love your background as well. A very very fun poem.
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Wow! What a great BD present! Now i'm drooling. I hope all this stuff is low cal! LOL, Gerat job! Thank you!
Love,
Amera♥
. Rewarded 4
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lol..."her sticky bun hips. " there is so much bout this that is so fun to read, such comparisons, "Add two scoops, vanilla with cherries on top." and all throughout this wonderfully cute tribute and birthday wish. Another well done,,
(Did I tell you, mine is Nov 2nd...just checking),
Evan
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What an absolutely yummy job you did on this piece!! Would be a shame it would be if this didn't place in the contest!!! Good luck!!
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Damn
Gal you are making me very hungry. I do not know now if I'd rather have cake or a deicious lady. Oh boy lol
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This is a reaaly SWEET poem. I think you did a really TASTY job with it. Your words shall be the PROSTING on her cake..great work my friend.
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Oh my,what a veritable sweet treat this lady indeed would be,all that is delicious and delectable tasted within the mind's eye and the best bit is that's all calorie-free!
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Now I am a Hot Fudge Sundae man. I use to tell people as I hitch hiked across the US that I was looking for the best hot fudge sundae. Many was the person who took me to their favorite place to have me try theirs. One of the arguement amongst these afficiandos was do you you eat the cherry first or last. Of course Marie Antoinette said let them eat cake.
In any case, this is truly a feast of delight and leaves a smile on my face. And . . . maybe, a few crumbs around the corners of my mouth.
Love, Tom B.
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Yum.
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