And so it begins,
the end of the new time
where a life shall be shallow
all shall be mine.
And so it begins,
a new life is born
she has been hurt
she has been torn.
And so it begins,
her life is about to end
what a short life
she has not one friend.
And so it begins,
she has no family
she has no life
she is about to be free.
And so it begins,
a new life is gone.
And so it begins,
the beginning of dawn.
And so it begins...
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And so it begins...
Good way of using repetition without overdoing it, though you should be careful not to cross that line. Very good descriptions and emotions in this. It felt very epic and just really beautiful in a sad way. Good job!
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