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death in December



proof of life -
white flutter
on black and white screen

hope flares
between lovers
only to be extinguished

once more






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  • Nicolette gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    I agree with Mary... your poetry is of a quality that really makes itself sit in the reader's eye. It's succinct and poignant and you always manage to say just enough to make the reader want more. This is beautiful poetry... such a gentle sadness here.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Cat gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    the genius of your writing is in the subtle strokes and gentle licks of your pen- never heavy handed.. just soft and perfect no matter the terse, sad subject matter.. the loss of something held dear is handled so beautifully

    lovely job-

    m


  • something vague
    December 1, 2007

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    good god this is absolutely gorgeous. the feeling i get from it is indescribable... and the title is perfect. i was going to pick a favorite part of this poem, but i honestly love every single bit of it. simply incredible!