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The Well

The well looks so
dark.
Water dancing in the blackness
like thick oil.
Fal
  l
    i
    ng down
        u
        n
        d
        e
        r.
You breathe.
It was just a dream.

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  • TearsOfRedForHer
    December 2, 2007

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    This is really interesting... I'm a HUGE fan of e.e.cummings, but I'm not really so sure that I get that feeling here, but I can see the stylistic inspiration.

    All in all, a decent, well thoughout write. I do love poems with a lot of form! Welcome to Allpoetry!