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So Is This What It's Like...To Be Loved?

She came so close to crying,
But again,
There were no tears.
She thought she was near dying,
But at last,
She felt no fear.

A contest entry

Lol. Cliche.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 9, 2007

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    Short, but strong. It can be interpreted several ways and I like that about this piece. Very well done


  • Dancing the Rumba
    December 1, 2007

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    Cool! This has a lot of meaning in a hidden kinda way... Great job with poem!(Even if that means I have less chance of winning)
    Vivien
    PS. Love the username!


    • DeadlyTurnip
      December 6, 2007
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      Oh, so glad you liked it! The username has deep deep deep dark origins... but glad you like that too!

  • juno0404
    December 1, 2007

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    This is so cute.
    I suppose love is a lot of different things.
    This might be one of those different things.
    MMMMMMMM?


    • DeadlyTurnip
      December 1, 2007
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      I'm glad you liked it (I think, lol). This was the romantic in me coming out.

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