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Meltdown

I can't let you go,

I can't get you out of my head,

Lettin' my emotions show,

Wishin' that I was dead.

You're drifting away,

Movin' out of sight,

I don't know what to say,

I'm tryin' not to fight.

My body shakin'

As you run through my mind,

I'm fakin' the smile,

Stuck in this bind.

Lost and confused,

What should I do?

I know you feel used,

But I hope you know that I love you.

Reachin' out,

Hoping you're there,

Beginin' to pout,

Wishin' I didn't care.

You're all I think about,

Fallin' face down in the dirt,

I stand there and shout,

Knowin I can't be heard.

Can you see?

I'm tryin to keep a grip,

But do you know what's happenin to me?

At times I feel like I'm startin to slip.

I'm fallin' to the ground....

Is this the way it must be?

I know you don't hear a sound,

But do you know you're the only one that can catch me?

Please tell me what you think

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  • XxToxicBeautyxX
    December 1, 2007

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    This is such a great poem, It had a really nice flow and I could feel the emotions you have put into it. I can kinda relate to this poem in certain ways with my boyfriend. Keep writing

  • juno0404
    December 1, 2007

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    "I'm falling to the ground"
    If you do fall, make sure you're laying on your back, you will be looking up at all the possibilities out there.
    May be you need to let go so you can hold on.