The hours I waited
The moments I cried
I could never believe
That you actually died
Why you
I hate this pain
The thought of you
Just isn’t the same
When I think of you
I think of the times
The laughter
And the dreams
The pain you caused
Only reminds me
Of how close we actually were
And how much I wish you were here
Author notes
"Believing in Freedom is just like believeing in forever...You have to make it happen."
A contest entry
- In A Dream So Far by Zerstort.
380 points, ended December 1, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For My Much Loved Friend by Clinging-to-Life.
450 points, ended April 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hmm....Im not to sure if this is more or less what i was asking for and you also did not enter what i asked in your author notes. please do so. Thank you for entering though I appreicate it.
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